E.L. Montague’s Reviews > Kenai > Status Update

This is evolving nicely. I am enjoying it quite thoroughly.

I am invested. Giving this story more time than planned. That's good. I have only one small issue about the lack of cameras in a future military environment (they are absolutely there, but not pervasive as I would expect).

I am enjoying this story and the way it is being told. One caveat, I hate fake cursing. Unless the in world curses mean something to the story, just curse. Storytelling should easily communicate and fake curse words break the flow, totally pull me out of the story (read the word, stop, translate the word, thinking it in conventional curse, continue). It's only irritating, but if the story weren't well told... yuck.