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Brit
is 30% done
Engaging premise, easy flow. The narrator's own voice, especially to himself, is very interesting. Curious to see how his frame of reference/worldview changes over time, especially as he has already referenced impactful things to come.
— 16 hours, 24 min ago
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Brit
is finished
Well, third third act was ~interesting~, but also lackluster. It put our characters in a position I didn't expect, but it lacked the courage to make any genuine social commentary typical of a dystopian novel. It ended in a weird spot but I'm not really sure what sort of ending would have satisfied me. Something with a but more punch, a bit more reflection for the audience. Overall, 3.5 stars.
— 11 hours, 33 min ago
Brit
is 63% done
As expected, I did not expect Part 2 to go the way that it did! Wow! Onto Part 3 then. This will be, purely out of speculation, the most interesting and formative part of the novel.
— 13 hours, 30 min ago
Brit
is 41% done
Just finished Part 1, cool setup. Interested in how future interactions with the Others will go. It's introduced an extreme version of the socio-economic issues of climate migration, so I can't anticipate the upcoming conflict and resolution.
— 14 hours, 35 min ago
