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Mono9000
Mono9000 is on page 222 of 384
My progression is slow because each time I try to read...my brain goes somewhere else.
Not much is happening, or it feels very classique.
If I could have more tension and angst in the next chapters, that'd be awesome.

I don't know how to DNF, I feel bad doing it. Moreover, I'm over the half so I'm going to finish it this weekend. This is my mission!!
May 09, 2026 06:31AM
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Mono9000
Mono9000 is on page 201 of 384
At this point, I can tell it's not going to do it for me.

Beautiful writing and lyrical worldbuilding.
But, I don't feel anything for the characters nor their story.

Arris could be interesting but he annoys me. His hormones seem to control him a lot.
And Demelza is a bit fade at the moment.
May 08, 2026 03:49AM
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Mono9000
Mono9000 is on page 77 of 384
Not gonna lie...it might be a complicated read.
The writing is poetic. But, I have trouble getting invested in it.
It is beautiful and the descriptions are enchanting.

It's makes this story very poetic but I expect it to grip me, to have me invested. I'm not even 100 pages in so I'm gonna continue but...I pause a lot while reading :/
May 03, 2026 06:55AM
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