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Bailey Georgison
is 15% done
The two main characters genuinely just believe the person who talked to them most recently. I don't know if theyre capable of any independent critical thinking at all, just be their most recent point of contact and hope no one talks to them afterwards and they will do whatever you want them to do.
— 4 hours, 37 min ago
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Bailey Georgison
is 21% done
Author is really bad at conveying information as anything other than an info dump. I have no idea what anyone or anything looks like outside of "lake" or "wooden door" like give me some more info dude. Dialouge is pretty clunky. So far underwhelming but not terrible, just pretty dry.
— 2 hours, 8 min ago
Bailey Georgison
is 5% done
dialouge kind of sucks. homie you dont have to tell me that this guy is trying to marry this other dudes rich daugther to have access to her dowry rather than for love, i can pick up on context clues. lots of telling and not showing so far, esp for super easy to pick up on things. author needs to assume that ive read another fantasy book before bc this is silly. not bad though, just annoying. we'll see
— Apr 05, 2026 07:28AM
