✩ Ori ✩’s Reviews > The Bell Witches > Status Update

I enjoyed this book :3
Largest critiques: the instalove, pacing/timeframe of events, not being able to get a read on Ashley’s age, run on sentences & comma splices (esp in dialogue), incongruous villain monologue
Enjoyed: depiction of Savannah, world building (esp the family history), audiobook narration, how the magic was portrayed, overall story, could sit well as a standalone but has open ends for sequels

Did this woman who has never been on the internet before seriously just say “unalive”?? Please can we just not with the TikTok slang in books 😭😭 Especially if it makes no sense for the character to speak like that 💀

“softening his bones”???? babe we are not making soup and I have so many logistical questions now