✩ Ori ✩’s Reviews > The Bell Witches > Status Update
✩ Ori ✩
is 99% done
I enjoyed this book :3
Largest critiques: the instalove, pacing/timeframe of events, not being able to get a read on Ashley’s age, run on sentences & comma splices (esp in dialogue), incongruous villain monologue
Enjoyed: depiction of Savannah, world building (esp the family history), audiobook narration, how the magic was portrayed, overall story, could sit well as a standalone but has open ends for sequels
— May 10, 2026 06:12PM
Largest critiques: the instalove, pacing/timeframe of events, not being able to get a read on Ashley’s age, run on sentences & comma splices (esp in dialogue), incongruous villain monologue
Enjoyed: depiction of Savannah, world building (esp the family history), audiobook narration, how the magic was portrayed, overall story, could sit well as a standalone but has open ends for sequels
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is on page 357 of 416
Did this woman who has never been on the internet before seriously just say “unalive”?? Please can we just not with the TikTok slang in books 😭😭 Especially if it makes no sense for the character to speak like that 💀
— May 10, 2026 08:35AM
✩ Ori ✩
is on page 335 of 416
“softening his bones”???? babe we are not making soup and I have so many logistical questions now
— May 10, 2026 07:53AM
