Ava’s Reviews > The Second Death of Locke > Status Update

Read the first chapter, I'm now 35 pages in, but it felt like 100. Do we have anything except the pretty cover? I didn't expect a lot of plot to happen in the first chapter, and I was right about that. But at least give me world building? Logic? Characters that have personalities?

Please.

Maybe I'm the problem because a lot of people seem to like this, but so far I'm not convinced.