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It is so distracting that the resistance forces are called The Eternal Flame.
I can't focus on these torture scenes when I have to constantly stop myself from belting The Bangles song.
— May 10, 2026 04:19AM
I can't focus on these torture scenes when I have to constantly stop myself from belting The Bangles song.
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Spoiler-y?
There are a few decent ideas/twists in this.
But not enough to justify the world count on this Dramione torture porn Fullmetal Alchemist fusion.
Yes, I got through it. But I have extensive slogging through not great fanfiction training,
>200 pages could have been cut.
It has all of the info-dumping exposition of bad fantasy and the "romance" is unconvincing.
— May 16, 2026 11:34PM
There are a few decent ideas/twists in this.
But not enough to justify the world count on this Dramione torture porn Fullmetal Alchemist fusion.
Yes, I got through it. But I have extensive slogging through not great fanfiction training,
>200 pages could have been cut.
It has all of the info-dumping exposition of bad fantasy and the "romance" is unconvincing.
