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Ranya Tobin
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Wondering how someone who just witnessed a murder and kidnapping isn’t at least disturbed :/ it doesn’t read well for the main character’s sense of empathy.
Her partner has monologued like six times since his introduction and I still have no idea what his personality consists of. They just met, and neither one has asked anything substantial about the other.
There is a clear lack of proofreading :/
— May 10, 2026 08:25AM
Her partner has monologued like six times since his introduction and I still have no idea what his personality consists of. They just met, and neither one has asked anything substantial about the other.
There is a clear lack of proofreading :/
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Ranya Tobin
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I don’t love the author’s voice…the imagery is lacking, the dialogue is immature, and doesn’t give the characters distinct manners of speaking. Holding out hope that it gets better.
— Mar 01, 2026 02:53PM
