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Ranya Tobin
is on page 41 of 280
Wondering how someone who just witnessed a murder and kidnapping isn’t at least disturbed :/ it doesn’t read well for the main character’s sense of empathy.
Her partner has monologued like six times since his introduction and I still have no idea what his personality consists of. They just met, and neither one has asked anything substantial about the other.
There is a clear lack of proofreading :/
— May 10, 2026 08:25AM
Her partner has monologued like six times since his introduction and I still have no idea what his personality consists of. They just met, and neither one has asked anything substantial about the other.
There is a clear lack of proofreading :/
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Ranya Tobin
is on page 128 of 280
This is pretty bad. All the characters are the same two people.
— Jun 23, 2026 10:10AM
Ranya Tobin
is on page 41 of 280
“Judge Corwin, a man directly responsible for the first executions. But—“
“‘Don’t ‘judge’ him too harshly,’ Zach said sarcastically. ‘He was a product of his time.’”
These are federal agents working on a murder and serial kidnapping case there is NO WAY they would be making jokes.
The way the story doesn’t take itself seriously makes it hard to read.
— Jun 18, 2026 06:12PM
“‘Don’t ‘judge’ him too harshly,’ Zach said sarcastically. ‘He was a product of his time.’”
These are federal agents working on a murder and serial kidnapping case there is NO WAY they would be making jokes.
The way the story doesn’t take itself seriously makes it hard to read.
Ranya Tobin
is on page 11 of 280
I don’t love the author’s voice…the imagery is lacking, the dialogue is immature, and doesn’t give the characters distinct manners of speaking. Holding out hope that it gets better.
— Mar 01, 2026 02:53PM
