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A RC is 24% done
1. Author kept using sternum for some reason
2. Misleading. Says it’s about love friendship and affairs then throws in a terminal illness. Some readers don’t like reading about terminal illness. That should be mentioned upfront l.
3. Plot was DRAGGING and wasn’t going anywhere.
13 hours, 38 min ago
Just Want You Here

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A RC is 24% done
Author sure likes the word “sternum” a lot.
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