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Chloe
Chloe is on page 188 of 560
I'm enjoying this now! It does have more fantasy than a romance so far, which is what I prefer, and I genuinely disagree with people who think the writing is too flowery, I'm finding it very easy to read. I have my issues here and there still, but I'm confident I'll finish this with more positive feelings than negative, unless it really starts to go downhill
May 11, 2026 03:36AM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)

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Chloe
Chloe is on page 507 of 560
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Chloe
Chloe is on page 440 of 560
May 13, 2026 07:05AM
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Chloe
Chloe is on page 78 of 560
switched to the paperback because I'm never gonna get anywhere with the kindle edition, I just struggle to focus on ebooks because I don't want to stare at a little screen all the time
May 09, 2026 02:36PM
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Chloe
Chloe is 15% done
This is just a very okay book so far, I'm waiting to start feeling strongly one way or another
May 05, 2026 01:53AM
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Chloe
Chloe is 11% done
This is fine so far. It is annoying me how she randomly spells words differently like 'dae' because idk fantasy I guess. I love etymology and language used in fantasy but it needs to be done for a reason. It also irks me how its male and female instead of man and woman. Just reminds me of incels when she says she 'hates that female'.
Apr 29, 2026 10:29AM
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Chloe
Chloe is 8% done
I craved fantasy and had this on kindle so why not give it a try, so far I'm liking it fine, the writing isn't as flowery and annoying as people have led me to believe, but I might just be more used to lyrical writing. I'm trying to find a romantasy that has a good developed fantasy world and thought this could be a possibility. We'll see how it goes!
Apr 25, 2026 05:05AM
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