Kellie Honaker’s Reviews > Whisper Down the Lane > Status Update

His chest cavity had been carefully cracked open, his rib cage fanning back as if it were the glistening crimson trigger hairs on a Venus flytrap, patiently waiting for its prey to wander inside its gaping maw.
This is only the second paragraph on the first page. What an awesome description! Color me impressed. I have high hopes for this.