Ashley - The Tattered Page’s Reviews > The Lustrous Dark > Status Update

MMC pops in and out of the story making for an inconsistent romantic subplot—would have loved to have him be more steadfast in the story. He is a sweet, interesting character/love interest I would have loved to get to know better

Lot of meandering. No strong sense of character motive

She’s as dumb as a bag of rocks… I’m annoyed