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Ashley - The Tattered Page
is 85% done
MMC pops in and out of the story making for an inconsistent romantic subplot—would have loved to have him be more steadfast in the story. He is a sweet, interesting character/love interest I would have loved to get to know better
— May 14, 2026 10:26AM
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Ashley - The Tattered Page
is 75% done
Lot of meandering. No strong sense of character motive
— May 14, 2026 09:26AM
Ashley - The Tattered Page
is 50% done
She’s as dumb as a bag of rocks… I’m annoyed
— May 14, 2026 07:48AM
