daemyra, the realm's delight’s Reviews > Vices and Vows > Status Update

A lot of mafia stuff so far. And the author needs to do a better edit. The tense is changing. The brother is referring to the hero in second-person AND third-person (“you” and “he’ll) as the brother is addressing the hero.

Also noted an instance of weird tense in the conversation between the hero and heroine in their first exchange too.