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Kinda wondering why Ruth didn't sell all these fancy clothes if they're so poor, but I guess they have sentimental value if her dad made them.

"The young maidens wondering at the meaning of Boaz's action, and the young men not wondering at all."

Okay, that's kind of a funny joke.

Did we need a Random Rapist? And he's so casual about it that it comes off as unintentionally silly.

"Not since she had married Mahlon had she contemplated other men, and she was not yet ready to do so."

Please, I pointed out earlier that you were checking someone out, and I'm 90% sure that he's gonna turn out to be Boaz.

"Naomi Ben Elimelech."

Um. I don't think that is correct.

It's a little awkward, jumping from thinking about her dead husband to "ooh, that guy's hot."

Typo: Missing quotation mark before "We owe her?"

First of all, Passover seders as they exist now may well not have been a thing at this point. Secondly, "not allowed to recline" is the EXACT OPPOSITE OF RIGHT.

"But it could have been a full planet away..."

Okay, that's the worst anachronism yet.

"And as for the matter of Ruth's devotion to a pagan deity, proselytism was not a requirement of Jewish law for foreign wives."

Um. Citation definitely fucking needed for that. Maybe reread Exodus 34, Ezra 9-10 and Nehemiah 13.