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I think I finally figured out what makes the writing in this series so bad; it's all show and no tell! You don't even get to experience a fart first hand, no no. It's announced. Then you get an introductory class in gastronomic anatomy and the history of fart etiquette. Followed by anecdotes of past farts experienced by MC. Then the fart happens. Only for the MC to pontificate on said fart.
— May 17, 2026 04:06AM
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May 18, 2026 03:08AM
AHAHAHAHAH PLEASEEE not this revelation on book 12
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John wrote: "AHAHAHAHAH PLEASEEE not this revelation on book 12"Whahah, took me 12 books to put my finger on it. I initially thought the OTT writing and character just weren't my thing, and although that's still true, now I can at least articulate why XD
The way you thought the writing isnt your thing and yet 11 books were consumed 🤣
John wrote: "The way you thought the writing isnt your thing and yet 11 books were consumed 🤣"Honestly, that's LitRPG in a nutshell 😅
