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En is on page 173 of 566
...... they're not allowed to kill each other until the end?! What's the fucking point of all that "battle inexperience" build up if it's just going to be a test of vices?! Ugh.

I will finish this damn book. I will not be defeated.
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The Stars Are Dying (Nytefall, #1)

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En is on page 142 of 566
This reads like a hundred little ideas forcefully smashed together with elmers glue and a prayer.
May 16, 2026 10:54PM
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En
En is on page 104 of 566
The pacing is so off. It's like we're rushing to get to a specific point. That's not good.
May 15, 2026 10:31PM
The Stars Are Dying (Nytefall, #1)


En
En is on page 72 of 566
We all know he's not dead.
May 14, 2026 11:00PM
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En is on page 32 of 566
It's not necessarily bad, so far, but I'd very much enjoy a crumb or two of context. It reads like sentences are missing. If not for this edition having an illustrated hard cover, I'd have no idea about the markings she mentioned bearing.
May 13, 2026 09:56PM
The Stars Are Dying (Nytefall, #1)


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