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Munderoon
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Nearly constantly shaking my head at this. First, Grey can't stop reminding everyone and their cousins twice removed that THE GIRL STABBED KIER, HELLO??!? then she's calling her sweetheart and sleeping in the same bed as her a page later. The inn was buzzing and after they murder four guys, everyone kinda ... left??? It just feels unfinished & as if nothing exists besides Grey and Kier 🥴
— 9 hours, 23 min ago
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Munderoon
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Having huge problems getting into this. The world building, the pacing, Grey in particular - so far, it's missing the mark for me quite strongly 😐
— May 17, 2026 05:33AM
