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is 40% done
This had so much potential, but I couldn't pinpoint why I wasn't liking it until it finally clicked: the situationship between the main characters is unfair. While both leads are supposed to have trauma, the story treats Vaduin's trauma as way more important than Danica's. His past is used as a plot device to excuse his terrible treatment of his soulmate, while Danica is just forced to take it.
— 2 hours, 36 min ago

