Rylee Cooper’s Reviews > Homebound > Status Update

“Good games let you do something meaningful inside the game world, change something, and in the changing, the player is also transformed somehow. Comes out different than they were when they pressed start.”

It’s like this author had two separate stories she was writing. Then she started writing a third, realized it was a perfect connector of the two, then shoved them all together. It’s not too bad, but I find the stark contrast between the stories to be a little jarring. Even in writing quality.