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Natalie
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I don’t like the writing style, wordy but bland, if that makes sense.
Also so far I’m not connected to any MCs yet. The MMC also seems whiny. The FMC seems weak. I’ll keep on reading and see if this gets better.
— May 21, 2026 08:20PM
Also so far I’m not connected to any MCs yet. The MMC also seems whiny. The FMC seems weak. I’ll keep on reading and see if this gets better.
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Natalie
is on page 138 of 336
so far nothing has happened. There’s no action, no plot, no romance, nothing. I’m reading words that make no sense to me. I mean, the FMC is pretty annoying and spoiled, and the MMC is whiny and weak (like aren’t you supposed to be a god or something?) the zombies make no sense either.
— Jun 10, 2026 10:36PM
Natalie
is on page 55 of 336
Wow the FMC is quite annoying too, I mean I found the MMC pretty whiny and I don’t like him already…so the fact that I dislike the FMC is not good news lol
— May 22, 2026 11:34PM