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Adanna
is 50% done
it’s okay. The names are cringey; it gives this sort of amateur tumblr fanfic vibe going on (Athena, Sage, Freya, Fisher, Venus.). The author’s got a vast vocabulary, yet misuses it. Most times the words are used correctly, but some times they aren’t and are ill fitting. I hate the fact that it feels like she’s just replacing concise words with slightly more extravagant ones just because.
— May 23, 2026 11:37AM
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Adanna
is 71% done
literally more than half way through the book and they haven’t fallen in love yet. They’re doing this weird fake-dating, friends with benefits thing and i’m ngl it sucks. The story hasn’t progressed much at all… not a lot of prep for the big festival which is a major plot point has been done so far… don’t know how that can be achieved AND they fall in love in less than 100 pages.
— May 25, 2026 04:36PM
Adanna
is 68% done
I think the main thing bothering me about the book is the author’s improper and unnecessary usage of certain words. Ex: I’d been inundated with the restaurant and getting it all caught up where i could..”Inundated means flooded; it’s mainly associated with like islands or land. Why not just use the word “consumed”? I’m all for expanded vocabularies and incorporating new words but it doesn’t fit.
— May 25, 2026 04:14PM