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Marizelle
is 45% done
Cringe. I really don’t like this? Is this the first spice scene? This is really bad. Maybe it’s the audio… where is the romance? This is so lustful and immature. Are these people 16?
— May 25, 2026 04:02AM
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Marizelle
is 37% done
- everything happens very quickly. There is very little build up. They have a problem, and it’s resolved on the next page 😒
- Lust forward. Why?? Where is the tension, yearning? Stark’s POV is basically a few pages of him saying she is hot. There is zero romance.
- Plot is grasping at threads
— May 23, 2026 04:00AM
- Lust forward. Why?? Where is the tension, yearning? Stark’s POV is basically a few pages of him saying she is hot. There is zero romance.
- Plot is grasping at threads