Jennifer’s Reviews > Bone of My Bone > Status Update

I’m just bored.

What on earth is going on

Girl please stop tongue fucking the eye socket of that skull.

I don’t like is getting sexual so fast. Also I was never aware this was a Romance when I requested it.

Are we really leaning into the old presumption that lesbians move fast? It’s been like two chapters and they crave each others touch after a day?

Especially for internal thoughts the use is odd

“How pretty she looks, how pious!” Once again weird exclamation and considering the inner monologue was very calm and normal before.

This author uses the exclamation mark in weird ways and in almost inappropriate sentences. Like something that does not need it, we can understand the grotesque nature without an exclamation mark

This book is the king of non Sequitur thoughts.

We infantilized Elsbeth really quickly on, almost taking on a parental form and now we want to kiss her and her touch is so magical? That was fast and this is not a good timeline.