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These book is decent, but the sex scenes are mad long for no reason. The writing is a bit bland and over-descriptive as well. So far, Robyn has had the best descriptions and story (until that sex scene), and even then there's no PLOT, no CONFLICT, which is really odd that a filmmaker created this.
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Over-descriptive. Robyn's has the best sections so far (except for the god-forsaken sex scene). The sex scenes in this book are far too long to the point they feel cringe, awkward, and a bit dirty (not a good dirty) but like watching corn. And there's NO plot, which is strange considering one of the writers also wrote the script and that was full of conflict and plot. Just doesn't translate here at all!
— 6 hours, 14 min ago
