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Simi is 17% done

Becks is cartoonishly stiff, 2D, and standoffish. Komla too.

The writing feels ... clumsy.

— May 31, 2026 10:16AM

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Simi’s Previous Updates

Simi is 82% done

The side quests into figuring out familial issues is so abrupt, clumsy, and distracting from whatever this story is trying to do.

— 19 hours, 30 min ago

Simi is 71% done

The MC is fairly insufferable.

— 19 hours, 44 min ago

Simi is 51% done

How is half of this story still left!?

— May 31, 2026 09:08PM

Simi is 36% done

We've reached the stupid confront a murder suspect without an actual plan phase of the book. Time to increase the playback speed to just get through this book.

— May 31, 2026 11:32AM

Simi is 29% done

The execution of this book would make sense if this was a translated work or English was a late in life second/third language, but sadly neither is true. Sigh!

— May 31, 2026 11:03AM

Simi is 28% done

Oh cool...casual unethical to illegal behavior by our MC. Cool cool cool

— May 31, 2026 11:00AM

Simi is 19% done

The analogies are so forced & the constant reference to the fictional mystery series a bit hacked/tedious.

— May 31, 2026 10:26AM

Simi is 15% done

A little slow to develop. I might have stopped by now if it weren't for a book club.

— May 31, 2026 10:11AM