Hannah’s Reviews > They Came from the Ocean > Status Update

“causes him to lose all the masculinity inside him” ew ew ew. He didn’t lose masculinity, he just lost courage.

Finally some action is starting. Feels like it took forever for something to happen. The author did do an alright job of building up tension. But the beginning, after the action in the first chapter, drags on a bit.

This needed a tiny bit more proofreading. Marcos keeps turning into Marco