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STARES AT REMAINING PERCENTAGE BUT HARDER

Stares at percentage left
Stares at the current state of the story and world
.... Uh oh?

See Rebecca Yarros, THIS is how you write small chapter interludes that go with the following chapter. Not like the "oh, character x has a never before mentioned power! Yay!" that turns out to be the deus ex lameass a few pages later bc we already got told about the badass secret thing.
Here? I was gripping my seat at what the interludes (and even a half sentence the chapter before!) told me and it was used so well!