Alexandra’s Reviews > A Vow in Vengeance > Status Update

Ok maybe don’t call a monster « drake » if your male character is called Draven. I thought during the chapter that Draven was the plural for baby drakes

Again « outside of earshot » might be really far, knowing they were able to hear a woman crash into the ground of a big, big wall

Why does he not put his wings away if he can? For the pleasure of being annoyed?

« my sizeable backside » really?

Okkk so they can’t have children, I should have seen that coming

I know I’m nitpicking at this point but if they hear everything, why does he ask her her name? She already said it two times, could he not have listened? I hope that her status as Wraith will be used more in the future because otherwise what’s the point making her one as a background?

And I keep being corrected, well played author, her brother and father were, in fact, not chosen by druids but by the other teams. Maybe I’ll stop commenting every 5 pages but maybe not

At least I’m not the only one wondering, the main character does too - good job author I talked too fast, guess I have to wait

She’s glaring a lot for only 3 chapters. Also I don’t understand why they would want to change people who hate them and give them powers as they can have kids? Seems like an unnecessary danger

I’m not sure I understand the Selection. Every year, one of the three immortal clans or whatever choose 100 mortal people but all her family was taken only by druids? I’m not saying it’s impossible but it’s statistically unbelievable… and what does that mean some territories were not selected?