kota :)’s Reviews > Just Friends > Status Update

no way that stephen king's on writing is the first acknowledgement 💀

possible minor spoilers

the current conflict is that the narrator doesn't trust herself to get into a relationships bc her partner's mom told her not to trust herself. i understand that you're fragile with grief rn and stuff but what?? this is like defying the entire feminist movement???

“harper sashays up to me behind the bar, and at her exuberant smile, i realize i haven’t seen her since her abrupt departure from jonny’s pints and pins”

boy that’s not how you spell chassé

uhmm btw is seabrook based on carmel

Okay, I mean it's definetly better than before, but still not great.

why’s it called just friends if they’re enemies anyway

Thus far I have come across two major grammatical errors (unless someone can tell me how the sentence “I feel like I floating outside my body” makes sense and that alone proves that this did not go through enough edits and was simply only selected for publication because, well… Haley Pham is a celebrity, so people will ofc buy her books, and then Atria has another bestseller… Do better.

Yeah because talking about whether this will work out for the rest of your lives is perfectly normal for a first date especially at 17