Gabriella’s Reviews > The Serpent and the Wings of Night > Status Update

Longest smut scene ever, I was stuck in traffic for like 5 exits and I still made it to work before it was done.

There's actually really compelling nature vs nurture, misotheism, and corruption of the church themes going on here but they feel unintentional because the world building is a little random/underdeveloped.

My biggest complaint right now it’s that it’s not giving vampire. If anything all of the vampires feel more like faries or fae. You can insert any mythical creature into this story and it would still read the same.

Stylistically this is a fanfiction. It has all the beats of a Wattpad story or even a YA novel like I would have eaten this the fuck up at 14