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Whickam is too sleek and too insidious — pity ! He could have been a great character…
Too many characters on this story set in too close quarters; the author doesn’t have the skill to manage such a wide cast and keep taba on everyone with coordinated coherence.
— Jun 03, 2026 06:43PM
Too many characters on this story set in too close quarters; the author doesn’t have the skill to manage such a wide cast and keep taba on everyone with coordinated coherence.
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Jun 03, 2026 06:41PM
I was quickly disabused of this as soon as Wickham started whispering in Darcy’s ear that his younger brother wishes ill on him — not too subtle a decoy there !
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