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Sarah
Sarah is 31% done
"Split him from cock to throat" pro tip: throwing in random explicit words doesn't make your story edgy it makes you sound immature (and yes I'll say that about male authors/mmcs)
Jun 03, 2026 05:00PM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)

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Sarah
Sarah is 29% done
ENOUGH WITH THE SIMILES
Jun 03, 2026 04:45PM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)


Sarah
Sarah is 27% done
STOP USING SNORT-LAUGH IT MAKES THE BOOK SOUND LIKE A BAD FANFICTION
Jun 03, 2026 01:31PM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)


Sarah
Sarah is 10% done
HAHA GUYS SHE'S SO QUIRKY BECAUSE SHE MAKES POOP JOKES HAHAHA YOU CAN'T TAKE HER ANYWHERE
Jun 03, 2026 06:44AM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)


Sarah
Sarah is 9% done
"I shrug. 'He was a squirter.'" THE DIALOGUE IS SO BAD
Jun 03, 2026 06:41AM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)


Sarah
Sarah is 8% done
Sarah Parker wants to be GRRM SO bad
Jun 03, 2026 06:36AM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)


Sarah
Sarah is 7% done
Am I impatient or is this book very confusing
Jun 03, 2026 06:27AM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)


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