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kassidy
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Hazel being eye level with Cam’s butt? She’d have to be like 5 foot and he’d have to be like 7 foot for that to work 😭
Of course that gets thrown out if she’s actually still sitting in the booth, but that’s not really clear since it says she had to unstick the vinyl of her thighs to SCOOT out of it. So is she out of it (standing) or in it (sitting)?
— 18 hours, 59 min ago
Of course that gets thrown out if she’s actually still sitting in the booth, but that’s not really clear since it says she had to unstick the vinyl of her thighs to SCOOT out of it. So is she out of it (standing) or in it (sitting)?
kassidy
is on page 76 of 512
In chapter 5, it’s mentioned Hazel has a convertible, but
in chapter 8, is driving an Escalade (a Cadillac SUV) which is not sold, in a convertible concept
I wonder if this is a continuity error and just boils down to the author not being knowledgeable of car brands/names/styles or if this will end up advancing the plot (or falling and getting lost in it). Definitely not a big deal, just something I noticed.
— 19 hours, 1 min ago
in chapter 8, is driving an Escalade (a Cadillac SUV) which is not sold, in a convertible concept
I wonder if this is a continuity error and just boils down to the author not being knowledgeable of car brands/names/styles or if this will end up advancing the plot (or falling and getting lost in it). Definitely not a big deal, just something I noticed.
