Dilonna Rutherford’s Reviews > The Hollow > Status Update
Dilonna Rutherford
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Chapter 1: I'm enjoying the story so far. Seems very mysterious. However the author has a couple favored words, like soften or soft. And it also read rather mechanically at first. I have a feeling once this story gets rolling, the author will find her rhythm! I have faith. The grandmother also lovely, she had some good lines I highlighted.
— Jun 04, 2026 08:05AM
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Dilonna Rutherford
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Nico seems interesting. I am still very much bothered by the setup though.
— Jun 15, 2026 01:20AM
Dilonna Rutherford
is 12% done
The grandmother is legit missing- an elderly woman just goes missing- poof! And these two modern day teens are just like, "Ope, that's weird- let's eat cake and stare at this weird book", the excuse for not calling the cops is bad too. IRL they'd report her missing and leave out the trippy magic bs. Leah is a kid, just turned 18. She's not in school, no phone, missing grandmother... omg this doesn't make any sense.
— Jun 13, 2026 12:50AM