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Sapphire is 70% done
Update: Enjoying this. Laugh out loud a couple of times. Still a little disappointed at some obvious editing errors and there are a few phrases that honestly make no sense. Example: The FMC internally narrated that the muscle between her legs pulled. Ummmmm what? That’s probably the weirdest one but there was another one too. Bought the book and am enjoying it enough I won’t regret getting it.
15 hours, 7 min ago
Offside Play (Sin Bin Stories, #1)

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