mihi’s Reviews > The Serpent and the Wings of Night > Status Update

This would have highly benefited from an editor. I refuse to believe one was in any way, shape or form involved with this.

The writing would be just very mediocre and unmemorable if it weren't for those awfuly confusing discriptions of action scenes which actually just make it borderline incomprehensible.

I am interested in the daddy-daughter dynamic tho, so I'll continue with the reading. Begrudgingly.