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we're off to a rough start. she's having sex with someone and it sucks. the writing also is already not great. i don't like sentences that just has 2 words. the repetition of refering to his hair as the mop is boring. i feel like she can better describe bad sex
Jun 06, 2026 04:38AM
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she's attracted to her teacher because he was really honest in his shortcomings of choosing comfort over the pressure of being a writer. there is a really great part where he has a monologue about this. Apparently her vagina pulses.
Jun 23, 2026 11:12AM
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