Kaelee’s Reviews > Annie Bot > Status Update

I’m still annoyed by the he said/she said/they said writing clunkiness, and I’ve lost quite a bit of my interest-momentum because the plot circled back around to the boring?? And with an obnoxious focus on sex?? Which like obviously I know is part of the point but I thought when she ran away that we’d enter a new type of plot-line that was just…. Immediately abandoned.

Very clunky with the “she said” “he said” after nearly every bit of dialogue. Other than that, neat.