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Why do authors tend to write 16 year olds like 10 year olds. They are more mtaure, they are almost adulst
Jun 09, 2026 03:04AM
City of Bones (The Mortal Instruments, #1)

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frieda
frieda is on page 273 of 485
Stubbornness is a cool character trait unless the character is being stubborn about small things. Especially in situations where they should be mature enough to know that they are in the wrong - that just makes them look stupid. I have an issue with making your female protagonist look like a 12 year old, because they are tiny, and tomboyish. Add being stubborn just because to that mix and they look like a toddler.
Jun 09, 2026 10:01AM
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frieda
frieda is on page 154 of 485
God simon is annoying i cant with him… i have to forc mysef not to skip over anything he says
Jun 09, 2026 01:50AM
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frieda
frieda is on page 53 of 485
I forgot how much i dislike simon and clary being with simon… i also forgot that she truly is the quick to anger, quirky, artsy girl who’s in denial which doesn’t make her seem emotionally complex but plain thick and a bit slow.
Jun 08, 2026 05:08PM
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frieda
frieda is on page 36 of 485
Whatks with the baely 5 foot, clumsy female protagonist who is really beautiful but she herself doesn’t see it? So tired
Jun 08, 2026 03:53PM
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