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is 45% done
The starting plot is original and promising, but the execution is very confusing !
The narrator point of view changes without warning, Elizabeth & Jane refer to their aunt as Mrs. Gardiner in a private setting, Darcy calls Miss Bennet “Jane”, and a particular girl who is said to be the daughter of an Earl is called “Miss” instead of Lady [First Name].
Surprising emotional complexity.
— Jun 10, 2026 08:50AM
The narrator point of view changes without warning, Elizabeth & Jane refer to their aunt as Mrs. Gardiner in a private setting, Darcy calls Miss Bennet “Jane”, and a particular girl who is said to be the daughter of an Earl is called “Miss” instead of Lady [First Name].
Surprising emotional complexity.
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