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You've gotta be kidding me

Still holding onto a plot twist prediction

The random side character chapters are serving the occasional purpose but it's still hard to care that much about them, and even when they serve as set up for a later scene with Rufus and Mateo they still disrupt the flow because they're written in third-person while the rest is in first-person.

Some of these POV switches feel pointless, even though (or especially because) they only last a few pages and so far haven't really served the plot

It feels a little early to be predicting a plot twist that may or may not happen