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Mother, give me strength.
This feels so pretentious. The writing is trying so hard to be flowery and profound that I'm becoming actively aware of every sentence and their unnecessary length.
Also, the contrast between the poetic monologues and the actual characterisation is sending me.
Someone let me know if it gets better.
— Jun 12, 2026 12:32PM
This feels so pretentious. The writing is trying so hard to be flowery and profound that I'm becoming actively aware of every sentence and their unnecessary length.
Also, the contrast between the poetic monologues and the actual characterisation is sending me.
Someone let me know if it gets better.
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