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Saruuh Kelsey
is 36% done
He's spoken to this girl in his head three times for about five minutes each and now he's in love. I mean?????? I do not think I like this anyway. Poetry is good because its sparse but this may be too sparse...
— Apr 12, 2017 07:48PM
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Saruuh Kelsey
is 81% done
Look, I don't wanna be harsh, but this is insipid. It's just ... Bleh. Some turns of phrase are lovely, but the story??? Stretches belief in a bad way
— Apr 12, 2017 08:24PM
