Saruuh Kelsey’s Reviews > Thin Places > Status Update

Look, I don't wanna be harsh, but this is insipid. It's just ... Bleh. Some turns of phrase are lovely, but the story??? Stretches belief in a bad way

He's spoken to this girl in his head three times for about five minutes each and now he's in love. I mean?????? I do not think I like this anyway. Poetry is good because its sparse but this may be too sparse...