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I need to finally finish a book again, but can I finish this...

I'm really interested in where the plot is going, but it has so many clunky metaphors...yknow if you're not an amazing poet, you can just write simple and clean sentences instead 😖

"Lee opened his laptop and began his search.

NYU student murder"

idk dude u probably should do that if youve murdered someone...just a tip...