CB12’s Reviews > Daggermouth > Status Update

I can see how this book would really appeal to someone who didn’t have a fanfiction phase

This is probably the most non sensical execution of marriage of convince I’ve ever read

There are like 15 reasons why this conclusion makes no sense

Also how does he know her name if she’s a masked assassin coming to get him

Also the pov is a little messy… if we’re in her POV, why are we getting commentary on how much pain he’s in physically, she wouldn’t know that

And I cannot read 10 pages without falling asleep lmao

This book is working with a level of melodrama underlining everything that feels unearned for the amount of time we’ve spent in this world lmao

And I wonder how some of this will change when it’s traditionally published because it’s littered with weird sentences trying to be poetic but don’t really make sense at all

“The warehouse chilled to the bone after sunset, sucking warmth from exposure skin until nerves went numb.” HUH

Okay so this is written for the intended audience.

I love how the author explains the symbolism of the masks straight up and the main guy is like this is all propaganda from page 1 (we don’t see how he came to said conclusion??)