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Luna Magee
is 57% done
Probably 2-3 stars. Interesting world which includes mythology. Execution is off. World told through dialogue. But there seems to be missing details. Not sure of the purpose of some scenes or how they add to the plot. The characters are flat and not believable, especially Mist. No one is that much of a bitch. Make her more interesting by showing that once in a while she isn't one.
— Apr 14, 2017 08:59AM
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Luna Magee
is 62% done
Stephanie is the most interesting character because she's the most complex. Also interesting that the reader is on team Hades/Able instead of team Zeus.
Don't understand Kai's reflection after "saving" Matt. He could still die later did she ever think of that?
— Apr 14, 2017 10:09AM
Don't understand Kai's reflection after "saving" Matt. He could still die later did she ever think of that?
