Shiny’s Reviews > Mistress of Rome > Status Update

Rereading this sorrowful story, but I feel there is a big problem. Arius. I feel like we needed to make a big, bad, sensitive man- so the author did something of a cope out- make him have a "demon" inside of him. It's a bit cringe. I understand the anger and the trauma etc. But I think I don't like this type of writing. Will see if there are more issues like this. It make conflict, but feels cheap.